When I show you my words,
I want you to love everything
Everything that I say,
And everything I feel.
When you are finished listening to my words,
I want an applause.
An applause so loud,
That people from China can hear.
And when I am showing you these words,
I want to lift you and take you,
Into another world.
I want to be able to take you back,
To when you were a little kid.
I want you to hear my words,
And feel my love.
I wish to blast you off,
Blast into a different world.
And I wish to do that,
Through my words.
I really like the beginning to this,
ReplyDelete"When I show you my words,
I want you to love everything
Everything that I say,
And everything I feel."
Definitely my favorite lines of this poem!
I love your poem... HAHA... I read it. But seriously, I love how you ended it, it tied the whole thing together. Every time I try to end a poem, it just stops, it doesn't end like it should. It was very good all around.
ReplyDeleteI love how you use words to create this piece. Where was this inspired from?
ReplyDeleteto be honest, it was just a really bad free write. ahha!
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