Wednesday, October 5, 2011

What Will You Do With These Words?

When I show you my words,
I want you to love everything
Everything that I say,
And everything I feel.

When you are finished listening to my words,
I want an applause.
An applause so loud,
That people from China can hear. 

And when I am showing you these words,
I want to lift you and take you,
Into another world.
I want to be able to take you back,
To when you were a little kid.
I want you to hear my words,
And feel my love.
I wish to blast you off,
Blast into a different world.
And I wish to do that,
Through my words.

4 comments:

  1. I really like the beginning to this,

    "When I show you my words,
    I want you to love everything
    Everything that I say,
    And everything I feel."

    Definitely my favorite lines of this poem!

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  2. I love your poem... HAHA... I read it. But seriously, I love how you ended it, it tied the whole thing together. Every time I try to end a poem, it just stops, it doesn't end like it should. It was very good all around.

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  3. I love how you use words to create this piece. Where was this inspired from?

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  4. to be honest, it was just a really bad free write. ahha!

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